A large group of people believes that males and females have some radically different inborn traits. Consequently, there are some particular occupations which fit only one gender. Personally, I do agree that the considerable difference between men and women can be explained for a host of reasons, however, I totally disagree with the opinion that some jobs are suitable for only one of them.
On the one hand, men and women have significantly distinct physical and mental qualities. Firstly, men are often more robust compared to women, which explains why training schemes at gyms varied for each gender. Accordingly, men are mostly able to participate in intensive courses while women are more likely to join others courses requiring less physical effort such as yoga and meditation. Secondly, in terms of sentiment, females are more sensitive, therefore better at feeling and empathizing, whereas most males are more objectives and often make decisions based on logical thinking.
On the other hand, I entirely disapprove of the viewpoint that several jobs only suit men or women for 2 reasons. First and foremost, the 2 sexes can be trained and instructed to hold most positions in every occupation. For example, many universities in Vietnam have successfully trained a remarkable number of female soldiers to sacrifice for the country’s army, while this kind of job is thought to be suitable for men only. Secondly, there are requirements for the collaboration of both men and women in every job. In terms of police, men are needed the most because of greater physical demands, nevertheless, women are inevitable in dealing with dangerous female criminals. In the business world, corporations need determined spirits of men but also appreciate women with brilliant communication skills.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that males and females possess distinguish physical and mental qualities. Despite that fact, there is no specific occupation that requires only one sex as all of them can be trained and all jobs need the dedication of both men and women.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... with brilliant communication skills. In conclusion, it is undeniable that males...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25377643505 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91705571513 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555891238671 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.252106039 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400746128813 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136182623649 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106762775009 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23991737352 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115222514252 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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