Across the globe, there are many famous artists who have won many awards for their achievements. Art is treated as a major subject in many schools. And some of the schools are yet to implement it.
I completely agree with the statement that art as a subject improves students performance. Art makes children more productive and creative, which enhances their skills and thinking ability. Students will excel in their skills and surpass presentation power. For instance, it is scientifically proven that the brain generates electric power to think out of the box when trying to create art.
The other reason is that it enthusiasts students to pay attention to other subjects as well. Drawing is an art which gives conceptual thoughts and imagination which access a person's brain. Due to this, the outcome in other subjects lead to positivism and students starts to perform well and this gives them the potential to enhance their skills more. That is why it is believed that it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. A good illustration of this is the survey made on schools who take art as a major subject and those schools where art is taken as a subject once a week. It was observed in the survey that the students performed well in all the subjects in those schools who take art as a major subject than those where it is scheduled once a week. It was also observed in some schools that there was less number of art workshops organised because students don't attend. It means students are not made aware of its importance which I believed, also a drawback and should be taken seriously.
Taking everything into consideration, it is highly recommended to schools to take art as a major subject more seriously for better future of children which will give them capability to learn more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
...as a major subject in many schools. And some of the schools are yet to implement it. I com...
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...rt workshops organised because students dont attend. It means students are not made ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...organised because students dont attend. It means students are not made aware of it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81028938907 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6870026518 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491961414791 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6697863415 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32712468372 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11903269825 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832275500529 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168647971402 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922940702254 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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