At the present, many companies define their products as a new inovation in the commercials commonly. There are some reasons behind this and I think, it is a good improvement for sales strategy.
First of all, there are large number of different products in the modern world and people saw and accustomed to everything. Thus, everybody wants to try and use new things and they demand this. For this reason, when companies and brands produce something regardless of its’ newly features, they acquaint the product as if it has latest technology and quality. Moreover, advertisements in the billboards, magazines or on the internet and television are one of the indicator of this.
In my opinion, emphasizing the products’ modern qualities has many advantageus points. For instance, increasing the sales, response to demand about new things and also creating more demand. These businesses which saying their products is new in ads are forming a race between companies and it helps to developing the industry and production in more modern ways. Additionally, upside of this advertisement is divert the technology companies to produce creative materials due to the emphasing.
In conclude, many businesses give point to their products as a new manufacturing in the commercial at the moment. I believe, it provides positive developments in the production industry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...to everything. Thus, everybody wants to try and use new things and they demand this. Fo...
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Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
... brands produce something regardless of its’ newly features, they acquaint the produ...
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the latest'.
Suggestion: has the latest
...res, they acquaint the product as if it has latest technology and quality. Moreover, adver...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'diverted'.
Suggestion: diverted
...onally, upside of this advertisement is divert the technology companies to produce cre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3287037037 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06309045706 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1799214239 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327860079009 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112363122279 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507476695066 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204545996252 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298461725369 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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