The Internet was first invented in 1980s to connect universities in order to establish instant exchange of information. This special network has developed to such enormous scales that today we are facing with irreplaceable phenomenon that serves to cycle information and maintain cutting-edge communication through social networking sites. However, some people opine that this new mainstream causes problems like inappropriate content and accessibility of personal details, which is prone to cause problems to every member of the community, as well as some solutions to effectively resolve them.
First of all, children, for example, do not have enough parental supervision any longer, since many work unsocial hours to cope with pressures and demands of today’s world. Young people are consequently experiencing uncontrolled environment, particularly while surfing the Internet pages, which overwhelmingly offer violent and sexual content. Another aspect of this situation is that social networks expose kids or even adults to online bullying and harassment, which in turn harmfully affects their mental healths. An obvious solution for this could be to reduce the number of hours of using the net. Provided that parents discouraged their children from the time spent online and instead promoted active lifestyle such as playing sports outside, kids would become less influenced by a negative online content.
Apart from a detrimental content on the Internet sites, increasingly trending cybercrime also needs to carry a good part of the blame. This has been developed as a major problem due to the fact that people tend to easily fulfill their private information such as ID or card details, which can be effectively hacked online by a professional fraudster. To solve this issue governments ought to design their regulation stricter so the privacy rights of citizens would be defined as paramount. Only by doing this can they protect private data of users and prevent cybercrime commitment.
In conclusion, the main causes of the Internet problems of violence and sexual content on the one hand and cyber criminality on the other could be efficiently resolved by implementing stricter legislation on privacy rights and encouraging more active lives. In the future, I believe that the Internet will become more sophisticated and independent world which will be able to manage all these subsequent problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the 1980s
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...sers and prevent cybercrime commitment. In conclusion, the main causes of the In...
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...lence and sexual content on the one hand and cyber criminality on the other could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54177897574 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96827308109 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0504188369 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.857142857 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110244977867 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366444729646 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266587590375 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642372440556 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0066428462845 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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