Most of the times considerably the rising of the crimes, which is committed by teenager, are related to the violence of the media. I completely agree that the mass media focus on violent and sensational crimes and crime is one of the main subjects of most news programs. So we need to discuss the reasons and the effect of media on increasing the juvenile adequacies then the ways to prevent and solve this unpleasant situation.
It is obvious that media have increased the crime because of two main reasons. Firstly, teenager tends to have role models. So if their favorite role model involves in gangs or was criminal, they would have been negatively influenced by the role model and consequently might commit a crime. Secondly, media is one of the most important parts of our life which we spend most of our time with. If the media's content was violence, it would affect our behavior and we would become depressed or disappointed, as a result we might encourage committing crime to make our feeling better and reduce the depression.
The solutions which have resolved the massive raise of juvenile adequacies is to enforce observation on the children and pay attention to age limitations. Children should use the media under their parent's observation and they have to be allowed to watch some kind of films for instance. Furthermore, parents should pay attention to age limitation of some kind of movies at first the children might break down but that is for their own benefits. Generally I enjoy bring children up with full of attention and care.
In conclusion, most of the time people believe that violence in the media is an acceptable reason for rising of teenager crimes. In fact several reasons are known up to now, and media is one of the most discussable ones. We debate the effects and the ways to avoid the raise of the crimes above.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255072463768 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.153623188406 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0666666666667 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0521739130435 0.0437548338989 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0347826086957 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63475679321 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347826086957 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00289855072464 0.00163938923432 177% => OK
Determiners: 0.101449275362 0.0861772015684 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231884057971 0.021408717616 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00869565217391 0.011925033212 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1857.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.803125 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30625 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240625 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121875 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63475679321 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.56093040696 92% => OK
Word variations: 53.065548879 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3333333333 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5713463439 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 45.3958333333 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.68604651163 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473769789407 0.332605444948 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150025831558 0.102741220458 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0866961417087 0.0668466124924 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600053812494 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157724553424 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21847021118 0.134430193775 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107413765763 0.0742795772207 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36165367412 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0607034839882 0.0638462369009 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354502024724 0.228012699653 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821929076869 0.058150111329 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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