People often say that money is essential to fulfill our needs in life, while others believe that there are certain things we can reach without payment. I completely agree with this opinion.
To begin with, a complete loving family tends to be the most significant element in our lives and you can’t purchase it from the market. They provided not only the physical support but also financially and they were always willing to share their love in order to make their family members happy. Moreover, happiness is a feeling when we feel satisfied from life or things whether you are rich or poor and you don’t have to pay for it. People who are easily reaching it tend to live in a poor conditional environment because the less requirements the more satisfactions to receive happiness in life.
In addition, having a healthy body is also important for a human being. It is impossible to complete a great achievement without a healthy strength. People who suffer from physical pain or metal damage that cause them difficulty to concentrate on work. In particular, those healthy problems happen due to people overly using their bodies in order to gain more money from day to day. Therefore, no matter how much money you have gained from life, it is difficult to maintain without a healthy body.
In conclusion, as a human being in this modern society, although money is necessary, a love family, happiness and a healthy body are the most important things in life and that money can’t be replaced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tends'?
Suggestion: tends
...r it. People who are easily reaching it tend to live in a poor conditional environme...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun requirements is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...oor conditional environment because the less requirements the more satisfactions to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86770428016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58928878616 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9573657081 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222532413131 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08617554566 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688000471766 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147715844351 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391284965061 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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