Nowadays, majority of people in all over the world want to manage their retirement time by devise an ingenious and strategic plan and this is one of the most prominent challenges for people in this competitive economy situation.
Lots of social experts believe that people should not continue to work when they reach the age of retirements because of some considerable reasons. First of all, they think while retirement people continue to work, younger people don`t have enough opportunities to qualify for new jobs and in this competitive situation they can`t find an appropriate job according to their capabilities and skills. In addition, some health experts emphasize that in retirement age people shouldn’t neglect their physical situation and they should be more cautious about their health. Because of these reason, they think that in this age, continue to work causes some unforeseen hardships and it can be perilous for them.
On the other hand, lots of psychologists believe that continue to work by retirement people can makes them happy. These psychologists think that when retirement people don`t work, they conflict with variety of mental issues such as Alzheimer and depression. Hence, by continue to work they can eliminate their spiritual problems by utilize some innovative methods in their new job. According to recent published documents in U.S, more than 60% of retirement people prefer to continue their jobs, 30% of them are reluctant to work, and this is mediocre for approximately 10% of them. Comprehensive researches among these people illustrated that most of them decide to continue their job because of economic attitudes and they think that by this way they can be more independent.
In conclusion, majority of retirement people prefer to be involve in their economic lifestyle, but I think they should enjoy their remained years of life and governments should create job opportunities for younger people to participate in industrial and economic projects in societies. I think this method can increase young people`s motivation and helps them to be more effective in their countries future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38165680473 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9162369365 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48224852071 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.018708179 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.583333333 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208432818611 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109011100558 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604068597996 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136993100013 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074042939517 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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