Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits while others believe the opposite Discuss both the views give your own opinion and include examples from your experience

Essay topics:

Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both the views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.

In today's era of technological revolution, along with other fields, marketing and sales business has also been transformed into completely new version, as advertisement on television or radio. However it is often discussed whether these TV advertisements have positive impact on the viewers or it is impacting wrongly, the trust of people. In my opinion, they are definitely helpful gathering information about the availability of the products and number of options, rather than wondering in the dark.

First of all, it could be considered that, television has great effect on younger generation and therefore, it can greatly influence them for buying products without knowing their actual quality. Sometimes because a person's favourite player or actor is advising or promoting some product, they may miss guided, specially children and teenagers and choose it. Hence, parents and many other people believe that TV advertisements are not good.

However, on the other hand, if someone is looking for something and for that, if they have to explore by personally visiting places, it is very tedious and time consuming job. Moreover there is some amount of cost of transportation is also added to the cost of product. Although, if the person have known all the features about the product and what are the options available before going to the market it definitely saves time and money both. As far as the issues related to the information being served, which are miss leading is concerned, that can be controlled by discussing about the good with its users, which might be your friends neighbours or other family members. For instance, there are so many travel agencies that sometimes it becomes difficult to choose the right one. Luckily, I sow an advertisement about a mobile application on TV, which provides details of various options and cost comparison of different
hotels and transport systems, in such an easy way, which made me feel greatfulat about it.

Considering all the facts and having a wider vision, I think TV ads definately could be of useful in many ways in our day to day life and age.

Votes
Average: 8.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: a person; persons
...their actual quality. Sometimes because a persons favourite player or actor is advising o...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...is very tedious and time consuming job. Moreover there is some amount of cost of transpo...
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Suggestion:
...options and cost comparison of different hotels and transport systems, in such an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09510086455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81103202057 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616714697406 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4027343232 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150304459102 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532447639437 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525859089216 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691586916843 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411267282458 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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