Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per their distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue that how and where youngsters make their own time in a beneficial way. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor, first of all, it is imperative that, young generations should achieve a successful carrier at their younger age. It is true that, young age is the period of time, where people have energetic, enthusiastic to attain any achievements which is possible to get good results in life. Second point is, although there is particular time for everything. It is not possible go back to age and to accomplish anything. Hence acquiring successful carrier is indispensable for every younger should be made possible by spending their valuable time in studies.
To Exemplify, a middle age person could not capable to go and study in degree class in order to get certificate.
As a consequence, although family and friends an important factor assist in achieving and gaining everything for adolescents, youngsters must facilitate their own time in studies to acquire dreams come true and moreover to stand up on their own feet.
Moving towards the second argument of their debate, the first point of significant matter of young generations with their loved ones are also helps in many other ways. For instance, when a youngster stays away from the parents and friends, he/she may mislead to activities like smuggling or any drug addicts. This would not be happening when they along with their families. Apart from this, there will be less time to spend with parents when young person will have their own life. Even though there are different ways to contact, the presence of loving touch and care could not be possible.
Getting a memorable moment with their friends and families are also necessary part of every young one.
In conclusion, according to my perceptive, I concur that, despite of positive sides, I prefer, young ones to find themselves valuable times with their guardians.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a beneficial way" with adverb for "beneficial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd where youngsters make their own time in a beneficial way. This essay will not only shed light on...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... age. It is true that, young age is the period of time, where people have energetic, enthusias...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...back to age and to accomplish anything. Hence acquiring successful carrier is indispe...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99726027397 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64128630019 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2937952271 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.294117647 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136622154041 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445498520089 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380371456747 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068750405255 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353542913243 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a beneficial way" with adverb for "beneficial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd where youngsters make their own time in a beneficial way. This essay will not only shed light on...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... age. It is true that, young age is the period of time, where people have energetic, enthusias...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...back to age and to accomplish anything. Hence acquiring successful carrier is indispe...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99726027397 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64128630019 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2937952271 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.294117647 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136622154041 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445498520089 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380371456747 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068750405255 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353542913243 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.