We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology had provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as

Advances in nuclear technology have become a contentious topic in recent times. Despite developments of nuclear science can bring countless detrimental elements into individuals' lives, they can be beneficial for environment and people. I completely believe that technological developments on nuclear science are existential treats for all living system and this essay will firstly examine it deeply, and secondly will look at merits and downsides of its usage.

It is clear that developments in nuclear science are major treats for living bodies on earth. After it had been used at the World War II, many countries persuaded scientists study on it. It is considered as one of the strongest firearms in the world consequently nations which want to be super power of the world spend majority of their budged to develop and use it. For example, a report from Manila Times in 1946 reported that more than six million people died at Hiroshima.

However, use of nuclear technology has advantages and disadvantages. One of the primary benefit is that it is a renewable energy source hense it is more environmental friendly than fuel energy sources. Further and more importantly, it is primary source of certain drugs. If it had not been discovered, many treatments such as colon cancer and blood cancer would not have been available. Nonetheless, investing in nuclear energy is very expensive therefore goverments would have to use majority of taxes for it. For instance, an article by Government of Manika in 2018 revealed that 80% of income taxes was spent to construct a new power plant.

By way of conclusion, besides its drawbacks, nuclear power is vitally important source of energy and medical substances. I totally believe that it is an existential treat for biosphere but disadvantages of it are overshaded by advantages.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is an existential treat for biosphere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09404388715 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88830605852 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5226623411 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207849983543 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699186371459 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060375758865 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123788312621 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356088733937 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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