Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people's attitudes toward careers brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether it is better to get a secure job immediately after acceptance or wait for a satisfying position. Although some people assert that people should enjoy their professions and do not waste their time on boring jobs, I, as a graduate business student, believe the opposite based on my knowledge and experience in the job market.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that, indeed, there is no satisfying job, and people do not want to encounter reality. Each position has its own challenges and risks that we cannot eliminate them and consider merely its benefits. For example, we people consult with me about being a successful pharmacy manager; they only think about the high salary and little exposure to hazardous materials. In contrast, what I see in this field is much harder because even a small mistake can endanger patients' life and create life-threatening situations. As a pharmacist, I am always under a lot of pressure, and I have to handle several responsibilities at a time, such as answering customers' questions, modifying technicians' errors, and discussing drug interaction with physicians. Therefore, all jobs have their own negative and positive points, and we cannot find satisfying jobs.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that instead of waiting for a desirable job, we can begin the entry-level of a career and improve our skills and knowledge. Nobody is born with all intrinsic talents, and we must flourish our God-given abilities to be qualified for demanding jobs. For example, the first-year experience as an intern gives us an excellent understanding of effective communication methods with managers, and then we can apply our information on the next level of career. If we just wait for our favorite job, we miss such an extraordinary opportunity to get familiar with different work environments and new skills. Thus, it is essential to obtain the necessary basic experience instead of waiting for decent jobs.
Admittedly, life is more pleasant if a person likes what he does, but when it comes to living expenses, we must take it into account that the financial problems can make our life miserable. We should fight to get our rights, and the satisfying job is one of them, but when life does not allow us to take our favorite vocation, it is reasonable to accept a secure job until finding a better job. Nevertheless, I still claim that a stable job is a definitive solution for most of us.
Due to the aforementioned arguments explored in the previous statements, I highly recommend my classmates and colleagues to take a secure job position and then apply for new desirable jobs to take one of them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94915254237 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92918920221 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8423698424 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.411764706 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7647058824 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284691627585 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900978714698 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566746161891 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159657510499 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152190920797 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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