Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people attitudes toward society's rules bring to light a question that has provoked a debate several times, namely, whether tradition laws are strict or not. If I want to share my opinion, I have to say that I do not have any information about USA but youth in my country, Iran, believe that we should not obey outdated rules and old people must respect our freedom.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that we so not have much free time as people had in the past. For example, previously people worked less and did not need special skills to succeed, while now, it is crucial to be expert in the specific field and dedicate a lot of time to master. Even during weekends, we have to finish our assignments or project and there is no available time to meet our parents or our extended family. Old generation contend that we ignore them and just think about ourselves while this is not true. We try to contact them via phone or message, but they feel it is not enough. Therefore, we cannot stick to society expectations and sacrifice our success.
Another reason that I should deem is the fact that new generation have different hobbies and different interests. For example, parents prefer to listen to classic musics while young adults enjoy rock or pop. It is difficult to convince them that difference does not mean rudeness. These kinds of challenges make two generation far from each other and they think no longer can understand the other side's point of view. Hence, it is important to allow all people enjoy their freedom.
Admittedly, there are several ancient believes that are valuable. For example, younger people should take care of olds, help them to go to the doctors and do their personal activities. One day, all of us will become disabled and need others' assistant. Although it is hard to listen to their repetitive complaints, it reduces their stress and makes them to feel more comfortable.
Due to aforementioned argument discussed in the previous statements, I strongly recommend people to increase their tolerance and do not see difference as disobey.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79564032698 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57658496884 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58583106267 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8470218796 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112383922041 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311422299817 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323204260488 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599942978823 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321096176108 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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