Recent days, school completion and career has become an integral part of every individual life. It plays a vital role in getting basic needs to live our day-to-day life. Hence, getting married before completing their academic or before getting a job is lead them to the difficult life. I completely agree that individuals should do marry after their settlement in studies as well as in their career. The following paragraphs would shed light on possible reasons along with examples.
To commence with the first notion, there are multifarious reasons are favour to the issues in school drop-off. Firstly, if a person get married during their school times, it will impact his mental health as well as his financial status. For example, a research conducted by High school in United States reveals that people who is got married during their high school involving in anti-social activities. Furthermore, at the age of higher school students do not have world exposure and maturity level which make them feel anxiety in their later age.
From the general standpoint, career plays a paramount part in our life to satisfy family desires and make them a predominant person in society. If a person getting married without secure job, their life will fall in the financial fluctuation. Moreover, the family man will not be able to satisfy his partner desires which offer conflicts and mutual separation.
To conclude, I firmly believe that individuals should not marry before they stand in their own foot, because the dominance will come depend on their degree and career. Therefore, people should put their effort in their studies and make a success in their career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10989010989 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54398175605 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9959909666 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188260512686 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721732944689 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778110287361 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114604393126 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692610229256 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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