Increasing number of students are going foreign countries for education. There are fragmented opinions as why students are going to abroad for study. In my opinion, students are going abroad because there are many professional opportunities available. In this essay i will explain why more opportunities is the sole reason.
Firstly, many students are looking to secure their future and it can only happen when students have financial stability. In foreign countries many companies hire students from college directly and offer very handsome package unlike their own country. This creates a inspiration in many students to move towards foreign soil to pursue their education.
Secondly, in many countries there are scarcity of good institution and therefore no job market. Even though students get admission in good college but they are failed to grab good job which can help them. In Syria, there were many good institutions but due to war the whole education system had been collapsed which forced students to go abroad and study in foreign country. So, nation's education system and job market are the factors which lead students to take the decision of studying in other country's colleges.cc
In conclusion, due to financial security and poor education system , many students go abroad for studies which is good because every human wants to lead a better life and he or she should exercise their rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25110132159 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64269581713 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6495624293 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190502340258 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767528187289 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493700339355 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11834539701 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382135835566 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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