Recently, the phenomenon of lazy journalism caused by the digitalized world, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested bay many that cyber space is not reliable for journalists to gather news, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that digital data could be a plus, not for anything, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss gathering news on digital space. At first, the advantage of digital space for journalists is to provide news in less time. However, many news in cyber space are not reliable to broadcast. For example, many news websites are rumor to upset the space of society.
In addition, by quick broadcast of news at a lower time, journals can attract more audiences to themselves. But, gathering news from real spaces and events could increase the rate of loyal listeners. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that a significant number of news channels such as BBC and FOX NEWS send their journalists to real places to record the events.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statements, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of lazy journalism and cyber news far outweighed their drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18222222222 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91323078046 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3944038397 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102507470625 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476852643196 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649107874654 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717674376668 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437675043143 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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