Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests animals or clean water Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals or clean water but the most important natural resource, which is disappearing, and important for everyone is clean water and without it nobody can survive. There are a number of reasons in support of my view:

With the industrialization and globalization of the economy, every country in this 21st century is trying become a super power. But in this race they forget about the most important natural resources, which are depleting. Big industries are emitting waste materials directly in to the seawater and polluting the sea water drastically. Many animal species living under the water are dying because of this and these harmful gases destroying our environment too.

In many developing countries, there are still not proper laws for dumping the industrial and sewage waste. As a result of this sewage and industrial waste is getting dumped in to the oceans regularly resulting in contamination of whole ecosystem. The marine animals such as fishes consume the waste and human beings consume those fishes, which results in serious health conditions damaging the whole food chain. In addition the supply of unfit water to many societies which causes many serious health problems like malaria, dengue etc.

Recently, it was said by the United Nations that millions of people around the world don’t have proper access to an improved source of drinking water. Every country must focus on the sustainable development of fresh clean water but with the increase in the population growth in developing countries and the demands of the agriculture and industrial usage have made it difficult for the Governments to provide sufficient clean water to the people.

In conclusion, I would say government should raise public awareness on the importance of water on life and follow strict rules against contamination of water.

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