If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Speaking topics in text

If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Speaking recording
Votes
Average: 7 (2 votes)
Speaking category

Comments

Thanks for your grading.

Could you please give me a general advice based on speakings which I have made? nearly all of them are 21 or 22! what exactly is my problem?
Thanks.

Look at the flaws:

1. still some `ehn`. --means you didn't speak fluently. Remove 'ehn' if possible.

2. The examples you talked are the same as the reasons you provided. -- means you didn't provide good examples to support the reasons.

To get a good mark, you need fluency + good content.

Listen and follow top users:
http://www.testbig.com/users/vanan
http://www.testbig.com/users/lauren

and more:
http://testbig.com/speaking-category/toefl-speaking