The graph compares the average number of UK officers traveling every day by three different vehicles over a period of 60 years.
There were clear that while both car and train have risen dramatically in the 60-year period, the bus has fallen gradually in the same period.
In 1970, the majority of vehicles were off cars, there were 5 million and using bus was the second choice of commuters in this year which were 4 million.. People have started to use the train each day so the average number was 2 million. From 1970 to 2030, while both car and train have begun to rise, the bus has started to fall. Traveling by car has risen about 4 million and the train has climbed approximately 2,5 millions of commuters. By contrast, the number of commuters traveling each day by bus has fallen sightly about 1 million
In 2030, the number of people using the car will highest with 9 million and the train will overtake bus to become the second choice of commuters with 4,5 million people. People will less use the train to travel in the future with 3 million users
- The graph below shows the numbers of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 67
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 73
- The line below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 to 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 67
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 73
- The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...muters in this year which were 4 million.. People have started to use the train ea...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...d the train has climbed approximately 2,5 millions of commuters. By contrast, the number of c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53125 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27303028283 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.069866325 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36087426445 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167680964407 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756231572353 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20332858858 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839925053124 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.