As a result of the trend towards a healthy life and medical research and its outcomes, the government of many countries have recently introduced laws to ban smoking in public places. Some people believe that this is a wrong decision. However, I am of the opinion that there are more benefits for all people than disadvantages. This essay will oppose advantages to disadvantages and will give reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, it can be argued that there is a beneficial effect on health. This is because not only passive smokers are protected against unintentionally second-hand smoking, but also studies show that the number of smokers is declining. In other words, more people kick the habit. Another point is that as a result of the smoking ban, going to enclosed public spaces is much more comfortable. The most significant reason is that by prohibiting smoking it is very family-friendly, as well to eat out. As a result, more potential customers will also visit restaurants they had not visited before.
On the other hand, it is also believed there are some disadvantages. One problem is that the ban is an infringement of people's freedom and rights. This is because the government shouldn't interfere one's personal behaviour in this context. Moreover, the ban causes that many bars went bankrupt. By restricting smoking inside bars, they cannot sale as much as before, due to the fact that the guests have to go out for smoking and will not stay that long because they feel uncomfortable and prefer sitting, smoking, drinking and eating without interruption.
All in all, after looking at this topic, i think that the benefits of the ban outweigh the downsides. Prohibiting smoking has a positive effect on people's health and wellness. However, we must make sure not to destroy small buisness like bars and restaurants by the law come in force too quick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'enclose'
Suggestion: enclose
...s a result of the smoking ban, going to enclosed public spaces is much more comfortable....
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... rights. This is because the government shouldnt interfere ones personal behaviour in th...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll in all, after looking at this topic, i think that the benefits of the ban outw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, i think, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9746031746 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83332221775 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568253968254 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5416647954 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0555555556 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202912743132 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580002196911 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734271864219 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125552645871 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214183645645 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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