Many young people leave school and hold negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? What are the solution?
Education is an important and indispensable factor for each person if they want to achieve success. Nevertheless, many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. this essay will talk about the causes and solutions for that problem.
Some reasons why young people hold negative attitudes towards learning, such as lack of engagement. if they are not engaged in the learning material, they may become bored and unmotivated. Besides, young people can become demotivated if they feel that their performance is constantly being compare unfavorably to that of their peers. Or because the teaching method of teacher is not appreciate, it does not attract the attention and passion. lack of encouragement from teachers and parents also make students unmotivated to study.
There are a few solutions to the above problems. One solution is to provide learning experiences that are interesting and relevant to student. Additionally, teacher can help by focusing on individual progress rather than comparison and competition among students. teachers should also change their teaching methods to suite and attract student’s curiosity and learning. parents and teacher should sympathize, support and encourage students in their studies so that they feel more motivated to study.
All in all, many students do not like studying because they have a negative attitde towards learning. Families and schools should pay more attention to this problem so that students can have a more positive attitude about learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, nevertheless, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52118644068 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83948578903 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3700663243 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278676664887 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945361641698 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131425241117 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174588732392 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973219347746 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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