Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Do you agree or disagree?
some people agree that community service should be a compulsory part od high school programs. However, I disagree with this idea. First, making community service mandatory could undermine its purpose. When students are forced to participate, they may view it as a burden rather than an opportunity to give back, diminishing the value and responsibility, while compulsory service might only foster resentment.
Second, high school students already face significant academic and extracurricular demands. Adding compulsory community service could increase stress and leave tham with less time to focus on their studies and personal development. Each student’s time and energy are limited, and they should have the freedom to prioritize activities that align with their invidual goals and interests.
In conclusion, while community service is valuable, it should remain a voluntary choice to ensure it is done with sincerity and purpose.
some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85380116959 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93596373291 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66081871345 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4196114506 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.222222222 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452291145347 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17900499662 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.250929927651 0.0667982634062 376% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304181979853 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.301752066757 0.056905535591 530% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.