Children's education is crucial for a country's future success, a country must have a good education to thrive and take on the future of that country. That's why multiple countries have different ways of educating children, some countries encourage competition while others want children to be more cooperative toward other children. This essay will discuss both ways of educating children.
First of all, competition is one of the best ways to motivate everyone to achieve their goal, one such instance of competition is publicizing students' marks and scores, this pressures them to inspire and try to get better marks the next time an exam is in place. Another motivation for competition is human instinct because humans are technically the same as animals, they are born with competitive instincts and will try to be better than anyone else at their job which can be exploited for better goals.
On the other hand, promoting cooperation provides a lot more positive aspects to the children, as most jobs in the current day require cooperation and teamwork so having the children be cooperative is a big advantage. Cooperation also alters the children's emotions to be more friendly as opposed to the more selfish competitive children, which can change how they behave when they graduate. Some people believe that the more competitive people tend to commit crimes more often than the cooperative people, in other words, being over-competitive can lead to unforgiving consequences.
In conclusion, competitive instinct can be used as a useful tool to inspire each other to do better at their work. However, a competitive environment can lead to mental illnesses such as anxiety and depression, thus cooperation provides more benefits to themselves and societies.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: jin96
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25177304965 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94994754761 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3184961422 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.1 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305575372807 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131970318307 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883039945743 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177408667521 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819092645208 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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