You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case.
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today, under the circumstance of enormous shifts in estates and infrastructure management, the issue of accommodation hunting has been heatedly sparked among home purchasers and renters. The phenomenon is even more remarkable across several countries, where home ownership is given more importance than home renting, which appears as negative from my viewpoint. The essay below will provide several reasons for the high regard to house purchasing, along with giving an insight into the author’s personal perspective.
To begin with, there are two major motivations to prefer to own a home to rent the counterpart, including stability of financial management. While the price for a rented estate or apartment can vary, depending on its owner’s decision, most estates under possession already have their economic values adjusted at the first stage of trading, which can be flexible for customers to set out a clear long-term financial plan to purchase. Along with such a financial benefit, the ownership of a residence building allows households to apply any modifications to their own residence. This appears as contradictory to the case of renting, in which refurbishments or decorations must be qualified by the landlord, given their current incomes to meet the demand. For example, in Vietnam, water purification must be taken into a thorough negotiation with the landlord, to decide the optimal option for any changes to the water system. Based on two given benefits, it is apparent that once obtaining ownership, a household is able to receive flexibility and comfort a rented inhabitance cannot adequately offer.
However, disadvantages from home possession outweigh the provided advantages. One of the drawbacks is low liquidity of a house under ownership, a a great number of estates and constructions cost a great sum of finances to purchase. This means that a household is obliged to allocate a large amount of time to mortgage redemption, abandoning the need to invest into other beneficial sections including education, job prospects. Although not subject to the third individual as the case of renting, the household is synchronously prone to permanent inhabitance within their purchased home, even the living conditions might deteriorate. Due to the agreement on the purchase contract, the possessor is only able to sell their accommodation for rent or move to another area for resident that adds up transportation fees onto the whole finances for settling a new accommodation, unlike renting, in which a person can terminate the rental contract once their demands are inadequately addressed by the landlord. These drawbacks thus reach to the claim that unless being taken into careful consideration, the option to own a home might be not much more favourable than to rent one.
In conclusion, given the analysis above, the reasons for house ownership can be wrapped up to benefits related to economics and flexibility to acquire personal modifications. Notwithstanding the mentioned benefits, the negativity of the situation also can be seen through two major drawbacks pointed out. In the future, as human recognition is highly raised, people will more thoroughly consider over whether to possess or rent a living shelter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, third, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 41.998997996 190% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2741.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 507.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40631163708 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11592386878 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558185404339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 878.4 506.74238477 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0267763765 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.277777778 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159909184361 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488302642755 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302330893379 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960950434806 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230185794181 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 78.4519038076 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.