Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the people to take care about the environment .Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment .Discuss both views and state your opinion.
In today's world, many people use mobile phones and the internet to liaise with others. some of the words change to abbreviations so that people do not need to worry about the spelling. In this paragraph, I am going to discuss whether this is a positive or negative development.
Talking with abbreviations words are to peak in the relationship around the world with friends or family. people use emails and Messenger to communicate with their friends and family. using the internet, and talking with abbreviations of words is a favour in youths lives, like LOL (laugh out loud), NVM (never mind), BTW (by the way), etc.
Moreover, some young people say it makes communicating and typing faster than writing long words. but, there are some abbreviations of words that sometimes stand for unwelcome meanings. but, people use them for pranks and fun. On the other hand and if people are frustrated, they use them for bad and sad things.
This shows that the developments can’t be stopped. they do not matter for talking between two friends or
close people, because that can't make hate between really close friends. Owing to, the suggestion has been done. talking to friends is the best.
Overall, there are positive and negative, and both have the same per cent for this.
- In today s world many people use mobile phones and the Internet to communicate with others This has resulted in the use of new words and different forms of spelling and grammar Why do you think these changes have happened Are they a positive or negative d 73
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the people to take care about the environment Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment Discuss both views and state your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...and the internet to liaise with others. some of the words change to abbreviations so...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...and the internet to liaise with others. some of the words change to abbreviations so that p...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...round the world with friends or family. people use emails and Messenger to communicate...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Using
...municate with their friends and family. using the internet, and talking with abbrevia...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... typing faster than writing long words. but, there are some abbreviations of words ...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...sometimes stand for unwelcome meanings. but, people use them for pranks and fun. On...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...that the developments can’t be stopped. they do not matter for talking between two f...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atter for talking between two friends or close people, because that cant make hat...
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Line 8, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...friends or close people, because that cant make hate between really close friends....
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Line 8, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Talking
...Owing to, the suggestion has been done. talking to friends is the best. Overall, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9212962963 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56158290157 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5133834003 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8666666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114995186663 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414443188611 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430473655489 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517149859858 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552847628931 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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