You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community.However now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working.
In your letter
describe the work you have been doing
Explain why you can no longer do this work
recommend another person who is interest in the work
Dear Mr. Rahul,
I am writing to let you know that I have been voluntarily involved with Rahul Eye hospital for last 6 months. I was instrumental in organizing free eye camps for underprivileged school students in nearby localities. Unfortunately, I would not be able to continue our engagement further.
Let me explain you my situation in detail. While I had been working to help the community, I was also hunting for a corporate job in my domain. Last week, I have been selected for a sales role in a reputed bank in Pune because of which I need to relocate out of Mumbai. Considering there is no branch of your esteemed organization in Pune, I would need to disengage with the hospital by end of this month.
I would like to recommend Mr. Ram for my position. Would you kindly consider him for same role and responsibilities as of mine. He is very keen to join and contribute to the community productively. Being intelligent and resourceful, I feel he would be the perfect fit for my role.
I would look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mohit Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71727748691 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0221625926 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.389577795 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3076923077 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206203205429 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663474973286 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529453791059 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123087415769 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671471962575 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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