Truth is the most vital factor in all relationships. It doesn't seem hard to imagine that what would happen in absence of the truth. In that case, it is impossible for you to trust anyone even the closest friends and thereby none of the relationships would survive for a long time. Approximately all of the people I am pretty sure some may believe that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people and maybe there are some people that disagree the idea but I strongly believe, attaching that importance to the truth is a vital key in any relationship between people. I can provide many reasons but I will present only two main reasons here.
The main reason is that telling the truth can readily improve your mental health. You know it may seem a little hard losing something valuable by telling the truth. But this sentiment is restricted to the only first seconds of and sometimes a short while after telling the truth. You feel much better than if you decide to lie. Indeed, lying naturally causes some bad changes in your blood pressure and heartbeat. It could make you feel stressed, uncomfortable, and anxious, etc. These symptoms are not only enough to make you mentally ill but also if they remain for long, will probably lead to physical disorders. I remember when I was a student at the university I would do my experiments in the laboratory. I was responsible for it. One day my friend asked me if I can give him the laboratory keys since sometimes he would stay longer. While I could and I was allowed to give him a copy but I was in charge of the very expensive facilities and I didn't know what could I do. Then suddenly something stupid came into my mind. I told him the professor has said you are not allowed to have the keys. I knew that what I did was wrong but too late. the next day he went directly to the professor whereby the truth revealed. I felt terrible and embarrassed that day and couldn't sleep all over the night. As you can see I did just hurt myself and messed my life by lying.
The relationship's quality and longevity are dependent on the honesty. When you say anything but the truth, you let your fellow receive wrong information. Wrong information will misguide your friend and will lighten a wrong direction in your relationship. The fact is that the world that we live in has been made based on the truth and exact facts. In this kind of world wrong calculations and information won't survive the condition. I mean, even one lie in a relationship is enough to destroy it. although I apologized my friend and he accepted my apology but you know, it took a long time to achieve his trust again. Just by telling the truth I could prevent this disaster from happening. This experience taught me that telling the truth is the best and easiest way of facing with life. Remember what we have been told by our ancestors: "Honesty is the best policy".
In sum, even though some may oppose the idea but I believe, telling the truth is the most important part of any relationship. Not only will the lack of the honesty badly affect your mental and physical health thereby ruins the relationship but also lying decreases a relationship's quality and longevity. People should start a relationship only based on the truth, otherwise, the relationship wouldn't go well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, well, while, i mean, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2765.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 595.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6794175299 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472268907563 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5414950723 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.37142857143 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243282673408 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534850156496 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540539276533 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163077837873 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533611951443 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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