Euthanasia is no longer acceptable in the modern society, discuss solution to accept this fact.
The importance of euthanasia which was debatable has now
become more controversial. The substantial influence of, assisted
suicide has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this
trend in modern society in recent years. It can be said that,
euthanasia is not taken positively in modern society, however, it can
release pain and suffering of a patient. This essay will elaborate,
reasons for allowing euthanasia and offer solutions to convince the
practice of the act and thus, leader to a logical solution.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why mercy killing should
be permitted, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact
that, physician assisted suicide may ease the pain of the sufferers.
Example for instance, cancer is a deadly diseases if not teated
in early stages, the cancer cells multiply and shutdown the immune
system causing body to stop intake of food and liquids, which is
essential for human survival, as a result people suffer traumatic
pain, and no human deserve to live in pain. Euthanasia, thus should
be allowed if a person is constantly suffering in pain.
Another reason why, merciful release should be analysed to solve
acceptance issue is that, regulation can be implement to minimise
the agony of the patient and thus, will reduce the strain on family
and care takers. For instance, seeing a close family member suffer
in pain is unacceptable, as humans are bond with emotion, they
tend to get depressed seeing their loved one in pain. Based on that,
it can be agreed that assisted killing can become acceptable if there
were enough collaborations.
For what has been said above, it can be concluded that euthanasia
is prominent, but solutions to accept this practice should not be
overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25347222222 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71979191047 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0960176082 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.12807881773 654% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.33497536946 375% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181492345865 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717049994238 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052498840034 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445928912693 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662916597177 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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