Do you agree or disagree with statement that is it is better to keep old friends than to make new friend.use your esample and reasons to support your answer.
True friendship does occur when some one is spending quality time to whom who is trustworthy and has emotional attachment for him.In this materialistic world,every one is making so called friends in order to disparate tasks rather than true feelings for friend.In my opinion i must say that old friend are better than to make new ones.
We all know about proverb 'old is gold'.Yes i agree that those friendships grew older where long time span was spent with each other do that those friends might have more idea about your personality and what kind of qualities you have rather than new friends.Being an old friend, they might be more helpful,supportive and might have an altruistic behavior.And with new friends this may be impossible because of lack of trust in each other.
Although to make new friends is beneficial to some extent.As we know that this may be demand of situation either in organization or in college or school.Because every one has to survive according to some particular limitations like same school timing,same working environment,daily meetings, some kind of favourism as every one has need this.For example,in hospital different employees are working some are truly friends and some are not.But in case of vacation replacement to fullfill their duty,every one may need someone's help or favour for this replacement in order to maintain the hospital discipline.In this case, so called friends do matter.But still they are not trustworthy.
In the end i must conclude that old friends are better than new materialistic based friends.
True friendship does occur when some one is spending quality time to whom who is trustworthy and has emotional attachment for him.In this materialistic world,every one is making so-called friends in order to accomplish disparate tasks rather than true feelings for friend.In my opinion, i must say that old friend are better than to make new ones.
We all know about proverb 'old is gold'.Yes,i agree that those friendships grew older where long time span was spent with each other.Those friends might have more idea about their friend's personality and what kind of qualities they endure rather than new friends.Being an old friend, they might be more helpful,supportive and might have an altruistic behavior.And with new friends this may be impossible because of lack of trust in each other.
Although to make new friends is beneficial to some extent.As we know that this may be demand of situation either in organization or in college or school.Because every one has to survive according to some particular limitations like same school timing,same working environment,daily meetings, some kind of favourism as every one has need this.For example,in hospital different employees are working some are truly friends and some are not.But in case of vacation replacement to fullfill their duty,every one may need someone's help or favour for this replacement in order to maintain the hospital discipline.In this case, so called friends do matter.But still they are not trustworthy.
In the end,i must conclude that old friends are better than new materialistic based friends.
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- Do you agree or disagree with statement that is it is better to keep old friends than to make new friend.use your esample and reasons to support your answer.True friendship does occur when some one is spending quality time to whom who is trustworthy and h 66
- Do you agree or disagree with statement that is it is better to keep old friends than to make new friend.use your esample and reasons to support your answer.True friendship does occur when some one is spending quality time to whom who is trustworthy and h 66
- Do you agree or disagree with statement that is it is better to keep old friends than to make new friend.use your esample and reasons to support your answer.True friendship does occur when some one is spending quality time to whom who is trustworthy and h 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.308 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07963893988 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.1344086022 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.006338349 48.9658058833 433% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 331.75 100.406767564 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.5 20.6045352989 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 5.45110844103 307% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328119718362 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212310858515 0.076458572812 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856596532377 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212310858515 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856596532377 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 11.7677419355 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 58.1214874552 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.1575268817 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.0537634409 267% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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