The graph shows the annual sales of hardware and software between 1992 and 2002.
Writing Task 1
The line graph clearly displays and compares the yearly sales hardware and software for a decade.
Overall, the most striking feature of graph was seen in 1995 in the number of components of computers obtained by clients while it was in 1999 for software.
At first sight, it can be seen that over the course of a year, 1992, the number of sold computer equipment was 20000 while set of programs approximately 27000. It is obvious from the graph that the trends in both section showed remarkable improvement, namely, 2500 and about 32000, respectively in the first three years.
In the next three years, the trend for computer devices which were vended experience a period of erratic behavior and increased by 30000 in 1999. After 2000, it shrinked slightly and presented small growth at the end of the period of ten years. On the other hand, at the same time, the amount of software purchased by customers reach a hit in 1995 and after 1996 began to drop and represented continuous decline until 1999. In 2000, it jumped to approximately 28000 and remained relatively unchanged during the period 2000 to 2002.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d for computer devices which were vended experience a period of erratic behavior ...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...2000, it shrinked slightly and presented small growth at the end of the period of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84020618557 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5629548141 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.375856151 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1531449691 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605660613947 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693544997186 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105711994247 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881541267821 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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