In the past 100 years, here are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computer. What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years? Why?
In past time, when there was no computer involvement in any task and all work was processed by manual operators. Since past 100 years, the life human become ease to operate with computer as it is balatent and imperative discovery. In this essay, I shall discuss the logical reason for importance of these inventions and will provide a conclusion.
Firstly, there are multifarous reasons for dependency of human to these inventions. On of them is life's ease to process work by get rid of human efforts which save plentiful time to concentrate on other tasks. Inventions such as computer which as converted human life to significant comfortable edge. For example devlopment of machines, electronic devices such phone, TV and many more. Other invention antibiotics become a milestone in medical area for humanatrian which causes saving of many lives. Apparently there are many ubiquitous examples which state the importance of these inventions in daily life.
Secondly, airplanes have cut down the distance in terms of time whereas in past all conveyance were happened via ships in international spots. In addition this discovery of airplanes have brought the many nations very close to interact, emphasize the traces and tourism sectors. It is claimed that what we are todas was not possible without these inventions which were happened in last 100 years.
In recapitulate, while there are many unambigiuous statements which prove the necesity of these inventions in our life. Without these inventions, life of today was not possible with all ease in daily activity tasks. There are further developments for
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23643410853 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82655952275 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3636660512 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243977035822 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829131130117 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493678183318 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145817172642 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438137272328 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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