We have often thought of creating am ideal society but most of the times we have failed in this happen what is your opinion about an ideal society
It is certainly true that we are living in materialistic world.Everyone wants to create an ideal society.However, many times we thought to making well society,but we have failrd .In my opinion, an ideal society is the sign of neighborhood. I will discuss both about ideal society and how we can make it.
An ideal society is the combination of several things.first is an ideal people le,if a society has an ideal people and neighborhood between people.That's is the well society.next ,if a society has better amenities such as better water system,good hospitals,transport and too education,then it is symbol of well society. Also,if members of society has well educated and conscious about their health.
There are ample steps with the help of this we can create a well society. To begin with,for creating an ideal society prior we should be conscious about education we should teach.our children up to tertiary level,because today's children are the citizen of future society. Take an example of prime minister of India started a campaign of pmky.it helps of poor family to get better education. Next,everyone gives charity to the society, which will be fruitful for society,them we should not spoil the ambience of society and help to create an ideal society.
To conclude ,I strongly recommend that we should create an ideal society, because in that society in which we are living ,it is lke of home for us ,so we ought to maintain society.Due to this is can be good for creating well society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08657998438 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7851455646 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.888888889 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393333032777 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190649012918 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998892831912 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280325670876 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944061019986 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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