Students, parents and educational professionals are questioning whether is more eficient assing accademics works wo students work in groups or alone. This topic has become controversial issue among them. It is know that different people heve a wide variety of responses to this subject based on their cultural, social or even professional background. However, as far as I concern, I believe that although people socialise working in groups, there are cases that work toghether is a problem.
To begin with I think that when students are assign to work in large gropus they usualy lose focous in the activities and instead of finish the project they start talking and playing around. At the and they divided the work and each one do their onw fragment of the project. On other words a accademic activitie that was suposed to be done in group is actualy done by each student alone. As consequence, the final works looks like a 'frankstain', a lot of content conected without a good transition, sugesting that the job was made separetely.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned is that some times some groups may have members that do not contribute to the task. If the project is complicated and demands time to be finished. Those students that really care about the activity will have to work twice, in oder to deliver the task in time without the help of all members of the grupo. In addition, students always try to ride this fact to the professor, they avoid complaing about a member of the group to not cause any conflict. This atittude mislead the professor about being god or bad put students to work in groups or alone.
To sum up, I think that is not efficiet to work in groups becouse of the reasons a listed before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...e controversial issue among them. It is know that different people heve a wide varie...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fragment of the project. On other words a accademic activitie that was suposed to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, really, so, i think, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78145695364 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61098541889 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9481386169 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228529781039 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759742525 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596532831311 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125819960099 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560174780865 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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