Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.
Everyone needs food, in fact, to generate energy for living and work. Some people argue that being a vegetarian is much better than eating animal flesh. This essay will discuss why it is always ethical to eat vegetables than animal meat.
Every animal on the earth loves their life. We all love to live longer with our family and friends while sharing the feelings and afraid to die soon. For instance, one can see cows in the slaughterhouse are terrified and shred tears when they hear the intimidating death voices. Therefore, we should avoid killing animals for food and instead, must be encouraged to love them.
Vegetables are rich in the complete stack of nutrition. Naturally grown vegetables contain all the nutrition that require from toddler to elder in every aspect of the life. A recent study shows that those who eat vegetables only are live longer than who eat other food. Therefore, being a vegetarian will help to live much longer with less sickness.
This essay discussed why it is important to be a complete vegetarian than having food includes flesh. In my opinion, human will be healthier when they consume more vegetables than they eat meat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...at vegetables only are live longer than who eat other food. Therefore, being a vege...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 198.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91919191919 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42882563388 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5496165622 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281871157429 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903561176796 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113072318429 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18842868004 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132858223147 0.0609392437508 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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