HEALTH AND FITNESS PROBLEM
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some nations, the average weight of the citizens is rising and the lower level of health and fitness has been recognized. This essay will illustrate some reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
There are several reasons for increasing weight and reducing health condition in our modern life nowadays. The main cause is that the economic is developing fast and people now live in an abundant life. Food seems unlimited. People can eat whenever they want. Also, fast-food industry has become growing more and more with a large variety of food and they have a lot of marketing strategies to attract people to buy it. Therefore, it’s easy to get fat in such an economical way like that. Another reason is that a wide range of young people choose to have a sedentary life and they spend much time for TV and stick their eyes with mobile phone, they aren’t interested in exercising or healthy activities. That leads to a health condition much decreasing.
To solve this problem, some solutions government should have made. Firstly, government need to invest more in education because education plays an important role in guiding people to a healthy lifestyle. They should be taught what the healthy food is and shown how to have a healthy meal. Secondly, our government need to examine all fast food ingredients to make sure it is not contained toxic or other harmful chemical. Last but not least, people should spend time for exercise at least 30 minutes a day. Scientists show that just 30 minutes a day can prevent people from some diseases such as obesity or heart diseases.
In conclusion, the modern life leads to increasing weight of people and our society should focus more in education to make sure everyone get a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'solutions'' or 'solution's'?
Suggestion: solutions'; solution's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93311036789 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55778291541 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8251594342 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186016067935 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612399673637 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617479792215 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116300114368 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578666294836 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.