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Many people choose to learn practical subjects therefore theoretical subjects will be no longer be taught in universities. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is a vital part of our life. In the past few decades, college schools have been incorporating practical subjects, on the other hand, theoretical subjects are being considered to be eradicated from the curriculum. In my opinion, I believe that academic subjects are extremely important for the future of posterity.
First of all, universities who offer both theoretical and vocational subjects will be recognized and become well-known. In present times, the youth desire to surpass the hardships of looking for a job as well as on what the future might bring. In order to be successful, it...
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Sentence: Students prefer to study for them to enhance their knowledge.This college students focuses more on courses that they think can be beneficial on their chosen career.
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Sentence: Academic subjects is important for without it, students can not acquire professional degree which serve as their advantage from the others.Studying theoretical subjects can be a key to open various professions someday.
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Sentence: As they graduated from the universities who taught theoretical course.
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Sentence: They will certainly be successful with their jobs,because they are molded efficiently from previous schools.This people can enjoy auspiciously the benefit of work due to high salary and achievements.
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Suggestion: Refer to This and people
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Words: 208 350
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 208 350
No. of Characters: 1107 1500
No. of Different Words: 131 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.798 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.322 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.858 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.715 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.405 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.777 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
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