Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Change is the only constant thing in our life. However, our reaction to change is different. It usually depends on the character of the person and the nature of the situation.
A lot of people consider change as a challenge, which they would like to tackle. It help them to identify new strengths and learn a lot about the weak part of their personality. They consider it as a way to find the path to their own individuality, gain new experience and develop new skills.
On the other side some people seem to react negative to it, as it normally comes along with a lot of work to achieve the desi...
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Sentence: It help them to identify new strengths and learn a lot about the weak part of their personality.
Description: The fragment It help them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past tense
Sentence: They get distrubed by the change of their daily routine and the required skills they need to learn.
Error: distrubed Suggestion: disturbed
Sentence: In order to ease the workload thet comes with change , planning are organisation must be implemented before and during such a process.
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization
Error: thet Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Through open and clear communication people may be encouraged to take the challenge , if they realise and understand the exact reasons standing behind it.
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Error: realise Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Words: 280 350
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.091 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.579 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.315 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.188 0.12
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