We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? In this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
These days, people depend on computers in their daily work, like: studying, running business and even in crime detection. They may be used on more stuff on future, some people think that it is okay to rely on computers and some people think it is terrible idea. Honestly, I think it is okay to depend on computers in more stuff in our daytime. I’m going to discuss about both views.
People who believe that it is good idea to rely on technology in more stuff in future think that it would help people who are handicapped. For example by using robots for doing house work for anyone who is not able to walk. Also, they believe that using computers in our workstations would really help by doing our jobs more quickly and they will save our time.
As for these people who opposes the idea of relying on technology in our daytime constantly, since they think that dependence on computers on almost everything may make us lack readable handwriting by relying on technology too much. Also, they believe that using computers too much may make us more unhealthy and lazy by using computers for successive hours.
My conclusion that people with disabilities can rely on technology for their chores and people who rely too much on computers must work more on paper work and must work out daily.
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