Some people say that for a hobby to be enjoyable it should be difficult to a degree. Do you agree or disagree?
In these days, people have their favorite hobbies. Their hobbies are pretty assorted and varied, some people believe that hobbies should be advanced so it will be enjoyable, In the other hand, they don't, since they think there is no need to make hobbies more hard, so, it will be more safe for everyone. Personally, I do believe that making these hobbies more intermediate would be more fun and I'm going to explain my opinion.
First of all, achieving goals on difficult sports like hiking makes people even more proud and confident. For example, one of my friends who had several disabilities and diseases decided to climb to mount Everest's top, It took him pretty long time to climb it and he faced many barriers, Like, low oxygen level and high atmospheric pressure. Moreover, he kept climbing and finally, he reached to his goal. After that, he felt more confident of himself by achieving his will despite of his disabilities.
Secondly, doing intermediate hobbies may make people braver by facing several dangerous barriers. For example, one of famous hikers went to hike once, then suddenly, he fell into tight pit and his right hand got stuck in huge boulder, he tried many times to release his hands, but he failed. He remained like that for 127 hours of suffer, hunger and thirst, then he decided to chop his right arm by using small hiking knife, It took him pretty long time in intense pain, but he didn't give up until his rest body got released from this goliath boulder.
In other words, difficult hobbies are good for everyone because we learn experiences from it, like facing barriers, sacrificing for survival. Moreover, it helps people for having better personality by being more brave and confident.
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