Some people say it is OK to use animal for our benefit, other say it is not good to exploit them. Discuss both point of view and give your opinion.
Some people argue that animals can be used for their advantage while others do not consider this as a good practice. Although use of animals benefits the mankind, this essay believes that animals shall not be consumed for the requirement of personal needs.
On the one hand, in today’s world the use of animal is considered as a necessity for human’s survival. Humans need animal for their food and clothing. For example, lion’s skin is used for leather jackets which people wear in extreme cold weather. These jackets are very well equipped to even face a temperature of -20 degrees centigrade and keep human’s warm. Countries like Canada face such cold temperature, hence, it is necessary for them to wear such warm jackets for survival. Moreover, farm animals such as cows and sheeps are consumed by most of the human beings which they consider as the source of energy and as a necessity for human survival. However, despite of the above argument, I believe that animal shall not be exploited for personal benefits as it will not help to preserve the animals.
On the other hand, it is considered important to treat animals the way humans would like to be treated. In other words, humans need compassion and love for their needs. Likewise, animals also need the same empathy. No human would like to be slaughtered or his/her eyes or other body parts to be used for any other need, so how can humans think of behaving in the same manner with animals? Based on the above argument, it is believed that animals shall not be used for personal needs and shall be dealt with sympathy and love.
In conclusion, although using animals have lot of benefits including satisfying the appetite of the person to the clothing needs, animals shall not be used for personal advantage and shall be dealt with love and compassion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e dealt with love and compassion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91719745223 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55224924845 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487261146497 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4368627517 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208130002633 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918053751514 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481762248951 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155111776832 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455159344298 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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