Some people think that people are defined by the place they were born. Use an example of a successful person to explain your opinion about whether the individual’s accomplishment were or were not affected by the place they grew up?
Recently, the phenomenon that people identified by the place that they born and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the influences of a cultural place are highly beneficial, such places are regarded as thoroughly constructive and beneficial by a substantial number of individuals, and I am inclined to believe that a peaceful place can be puls, I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this statement as a right viewpoint. At first, a location with good people is influential to make honest young people. However, the family has a high effect besides the society. the family and local community can breed young people as right individuals or criminals. For example, children that born and grown in the situations such as educated families and an area with wealthy people will become same wealthy or educated.
In addition, some individuals will not become like the people that lived among them. there are people like Bill Gates that lived in a poor family but became the richest person in the world. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MTY University in 2010 has shown that a significant number of people changed the direction of their life as they were in belief that the human has a high capacity to create the best future.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the place that a person grow in is highly effective on his personality and future prosperous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...eople identified by the place that they born and its corresponding impact has sparke...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... has a high effect besides the society. the family and local community can breed yo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... like the people that lived among them. there are people like Bill Gates that lived i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06225680934 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78675293399 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6361975416 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238202907032 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788111490871 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497118892247 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127524214501 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454517908401 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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