Computer technology are an paramount important aspects in human’s life. This brings up the controversial question: whether the government should spend majority of the money in developing and purchasing new computer technology? Different people will have different opinion on this question. Nevertheless, in my prespective I disagree with the viewpoint of the government using money in buying computer technology. I will be further supporting my statement in the next two paragraph.
To begin with, India is still a developing country. There are many regions mostly rural where the development of roads, infrastructure, transport facility, etc. is still not done. Increase in population leads to increase in pollution, government should focus on developing more transportation facilities not only to decrease pollution but also the traffic.
Furthermore, Individuals in India are either uneducated or unemployed. Taking care of these two important factors, government should develop schools and industries in order to reduce the ratio of uneducated and unemployed mankind.
There is no denying the fact that ,computer makes our work lot easier and act as a time saver. For example- e-business makes it easier to purchase by just clicking, household could pay monthly bill( electricity,phone,etc.). Not only in household but also in business world computer technology is being utilised on a day to day basis.
To draw the conclusion, according to the above mentioned reasons and weighing the pros and cons of computer technology advancement , I believe computer technology is crucial but as a developing country there are more important factors to be focused on rather than the computer technology.
- Some people think that government should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? 67
- Some people think that government should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? 73
- Some people think that government should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs Which one of these opinions do you agree with 49
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63178294574 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32194453808 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.120906908 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256784579765 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729241064318 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714060407922 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120936042643 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810567577338 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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