Some people believe that parents should give a small amount of money to their children to do home tasks while others believe that children should not be paid. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the heavy burdens on the shoulder of parents is raising children who are well-adjusted in the society, away from all prevailing anamolities. Indeed, parents put their efforts so as to help their children to deal with trials and tribulations. Some people believe that parents should give a small amount of money to their children to do house's tasks while others take a radically different view and allege that it is not necessarily needed to pay because it is their duty. However, the popular salient to which I vehemently cling is that if parents give their children some money, they might not be able to take the responsibility of their acts and grow maturely. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, there is no doubt that life has some difficulties and these difficulties could be sweet or painful as well, which accompany us in the whole life. Broadly speaking, parents should bend over backward and try to help their children to face many problems in their personal lives and handle them vigorously. In fact, it is incumbent upon children to do home tasks owing to the fact that it provides an opportunity for them to learn how to take the responsibility of their acts. As a tangible example, majorities of people who had been paid for such tasks during their children now are not capable enough to do their tasks successfully and pass the buck when confronting a problem. To elucidate more on this issue, do home tasks is the fundamental rule when it comes to maturity and nurturing children. Not only can these tasks help them to grow maturely but also can help them to become a self-sufficient person.
Another salient point in corroborating my stance is that these tasks accompany children in the whole life, so, parents should make an effort to teach their children to do their tasks completely without being paid. If we take a minute to ponder over it, children should learn how to do a task. For instance, when a child is assigned to do a work, he should be careful to do his duty meticulously without doing something wrong. This attitude could help children to complete their duties carefully and successfully without being criticized. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that does home tasks without paying money play a consequential role in the children's lives due to the fact that these tasks determine whether children could be successful or not.
However, every coin has two sides. If parents give some money to their children because of home tasks, not only can they indirectly enhance children's motivation to do the job but also can stir up children to do their jobs regularly without any problem. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal stance.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that parents should help their children to learn basic tasks like home tasks without paying a small amount of money. This could foster a sense of responsibility in children and dictate that these tasks are their duties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ties. Indeed, parents put their efforts so as to help their children to deal with trials...
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Line 9, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tate that these tasks are their duties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, well, while, as to, broadly speaking, for instance, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2591.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87030075188 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70920616387 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46992481203 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0894572169 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.380952381 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509443845692 0.236089414692 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159214792788 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121692343024 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313563354424 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713858987448 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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