Some people prefer to play team sports, while other prefers to play individual sports. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which you prefer and why?
The importance of play team sports or individual sports, which was always debatable, has now more controversial. The substantial influence of sports has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this on the players over the years. It can be agreed that play team sports and play individual sport is good for all the players. This essay will elaborate both the advantages of this thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons of play team sports is beneficial to the players Today, but the most conspicuous that lies in the fact that players who play team sports that much good in their game because, you can learn how to do teamwork. A player will become more responsible person. If you watch football match the bonding between the players is very good that they are do good passes to each other. Another key justification for upholding this notion is that you can become more discipline person at high level.
On the other hand, antagonist who professes that play individual sports is helpful for people. Firstly, you cannot have to the wait whole team to practice. Undoubtedly, individual can make their own plan and execute on the field.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of play team sport and play individual sport is prominent. But still I believe that play team sports is good because, you can ask for substitute if you injured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er will become more responsible person. If you watch football match the bonding be...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... the players is very good that they are do good passes to each other. Another key ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, still, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84897959184 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57331968038 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4695791718 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216499447034 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865907369369 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670140249292 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148846789337 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308654004901 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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