Cars have become the main source of transportation in almost all the countries. Some people believe that in twenty year there will be fewer cars in the roads; On the other hand, others claim that in fact they will increase in number. In my opinion I think the production of cars will decrease because of enviromental issues and the increase of mass-transportation.
First, One enviromental issue that cars have to face within twenty years is global warming. This is due to the fact that the car industry is responsible for the release of CO2 , which is one of the main causes of global warming. For example,In my country there are laws that restrain the use of cars with more than 10 years of use since the combustion of this engine is not effective and release so much carbon dioxide.
Second, Another enviromental problem that cars must solve is the use of fossil fuels that impact in the enviroment. In this days most of the transportation system is based of the use of fossil fuel, so they can not work without this material. On the other hand, Scientist have estimated that the reserves of oil will decrease in every part of the world because of the overuse of industrialized countries. Therefore, Many cars will not have the fuel need it for moving.
Finally, Cars will be replace for mass transportation. In these days more and more countries are investing in mass transportations such buses and trains since they are more efficient and enviromental friendly. This change in commuting enables more people to get to their jobs without making any traffic. Moreover, they will be able to spend less money in repairments and maintainces.For instance , In my country there is a serious problem with traffic jams; However, with the new transportation system many people spent less money and time to get where they want.
In conclusion,There is a little possibility that cars will remain in the market since they have to face different enviromental problems and also the increase of other type of transportation such as train and buses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91066282421 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93010170711 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484149855908 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8256225582 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 5.45110844103 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150830628022 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590382536942 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457557430874 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911612520178 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399820080561 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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