In developing countries, tourism has disadvatages or advantages?
With the advent of 21st century tourism has leapt to a level that was unimaginable five decades ago. Nowadays, it can be see that in every country tourism is the part of income. Tourism play vital role in enhance the economic growth of the country. Today, it is very debatable topic tourism is the advantage or disadvantage for devloping countries. Tourism has both pros and cons and my reasons will be mentioned in the following essay and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To began with, on the postive side, in devloping countries all the things is very cheap like Hotels, taxi, train and so worth. Secondly, devloping countries are more attracted to culture and religions. So, that is why it is the golden chance for tourist to explore it. Last but not least, some historical buildings are to much in these countries as well as it is all the natural beauty. For example, in India, most of the tourist are attracted to see historical buildings like fort, Taj mahal and so many tamples.
On the other hand, every coin has two side, and same like in this situation tourism ahs some drawbacks. First of all, in developing countries crime rate is high and some foreigners are scared to these things because they research about it and their friends and relatives also give some suggestion those already experiece it.
To sum up, after analyzing the explanation above it can be clearly concluded that underdevloped countries are benefited for tourism but at the same time we cannot ignore its drawbacks. Moreover, these countries ahve need to improve their infrastructure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
... tourism is the part of income. Tourism play vital role in enhance the economic grow...
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Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ot least, some historical buildings are to much in these countries as well as it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66164853269 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4492432005 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158480138685 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527824953667 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706115293624 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887453955642 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904810782105 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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