Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are opposing views regarding children enrollment in school in their early age. Schooling is an essence of life for any child to groom as a successful human being. There are some benefits to early school life of children which are discussed in detail in this essay.
Firstly, children at school come across different other people of diverse ages and cultures. When a child is admitted into a school in his early years of life, his communication and socializing skills are drastically improved as compared to a child at home. For instance, children gossiping together in a class or speaking with teachers. This can enhance their socializing and communication skills by far.
Secondly, a child going to school in early age need less dependency on others than the one at home. As, children are more assisted: pampered, at home by their parents. However, its opposite to the children who goes to school in early childhood. Such as, their are required to do their homework by their own, they shop their pencils, wash their hands and eat their lunch.
Lastly, the key advantage is that they learn how to work together. Where, children who are at home may possibly grow up as a lonely child or find it hard to work with others. While, children at school can result in a good group member or team player which can practically be of demand in their professional life later on. For example, students doing an assignment together in a group or playing in a team of football.
To conclude, the advantages of children going to school in early life are of prime importance which must not be neglected. As, it can help children with improved communication and socializing skills, good team member and are less dependent on others.
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Message: Use simply 'may'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85472972973 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66815546727 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516891891892 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7446338214 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5294117647 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243632175656 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090408222025 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471734818179 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148309295116 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147645535871 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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