One of the prominent challenges of our era is the world hunger. Despite the ever-growing advances in agriculture and food production, some parts of the world still suffer from this problem. This essay seeks to enlist some of the causes followed by reasonable solutions.
On the one hand, while there are a plethora of reasons, some are more dominant. First and foremost, the wealth distribution is unfair. We have a colossal gap between the rich people and those who are deprived, which means in spite the developments in agriculture that have led to an abundance of food products, some people do not have the financial means to buy them. Secondly, the majority of produced food is wasted. The amount of consumables that are thrown away especially in developed countries is terrifying. For example, research shows in the U.S alone, 100 million tons of food has been wasted in 2017. Last but not least, inefficient and corrupt government officials in third-world countries add to the magnitude of the problem. It has been acknowledged by dependable sources that many of these bureaucrats prevent the public to have access to food for personal gain.
On the other hand, the aforementioned challenge can be tackled if the right methods are used. Firstly, by decreasing unemployment rate and increasing wages, more people will have the capital to be able to provide food for their dependents and themselves. Secondly, increasing sales-tax for food products in richer countries ensures the food waste prevention. Lastly, introducing legislation to stop and avert personal gains in government body is a step in the right direction.
By the way of conclusion, although world hunger is a growing concern in our world that is caused by various reasons such as wealth distribution, food wastage, and corrupt authorities, it can be averted by reasonable solutions like increasing wages, sale-tax in developed countries and stricter law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, third, while, for example, such as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20192307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95080576867 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4164989869 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140386361118 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411435231795 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501744908868 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934958815515 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538296107072 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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