SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT CHILDREN SHOULD RECEIVE FORMAL TRAINING AT SCHOOL AT HOW TO BE GOOD PARENTS IN THE FUTURE.
DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?
Schools and educations institutions are the fundamental pillars, which have A strong influence on our lives. We learn and embrace all the basics of life during the early schooling. Therefore, many argue to provide an insight and training to their children to become good parents, and I totally agree with this newer idea. In the essay text, I will try to outline the possible positive outcomes of this training.
First and foremost, such an insight and the understanding of parents’ life will definitely enlighten them with all the sacrifices done by their parents and other family members for their upbringing. As a consequence, they will respect and value the family more and more. Secondly, with inculcating family values, children will become more responsible and acquire serious approach for personal and professional goals. Our society has witnessed the stories of many children with poor family backgrounds, where parents worked hard for basic amenities and children revitalize their life with great achievements. Such success sometimes initiates chain reactions and siblings also get motivated and inspired.
Lastly, during training will children will also get acquainted dos and don’ts, to be good parents and such a precious information during early phase may strengthen the basic foundations of not only their lives but also infuse excellent properties to the society.
On the contrary, many argue for the professional and vocational training of children to secure better financial future. But my inclination is towards the universally acknowledged fact “better parents give excellent gentlemen to society”. Therefore I strongly believe that such training will fructify with worthy positive outcomes.
- SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT CHILDREN SHOULD RECEIVE FORMAL TRAINING AT SCHOOL AT HOW TO BE GOOD PARENTS IN THE FUTURE DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT 60
- SOME CELEBRITIES SAT THAT THEIR PRIVATE LIVES SHOULD NOT COME UNDER MEDIA SCRUTINY OTHER PEOPLE HOWEVER BELIEVE THAT THEY SHOULD ACCEPT IT AS PART OF THEIR FAME Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62977099237 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95572923238 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4151625161 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161817524468 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558300573599 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473170789845 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103235343307 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168530202797 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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