Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?
Giving solutions to environmental problems such as air pollution or global warming has become the most concerning matter for all mankind. Some people think that this task needs to be carried out by international organization rather than individual government. In my opinion, I would disagree that such responsibility belongs mostly to international organization.
To begin with, environmental problems do require global solutions from international corporation. For the best results, the international organization have to research and provide general instructions to deal with the current issues of the environment. With these guidelines, nations can then follow one direction to create practical solutions that suit their conditions. For example, Vietnamese Congress has run campaigns to grow more trees in the main cities based on the guidance from W.H.O which greatly degrades the amount of exhausted fumes in the air. Therefore, international organization takes an important role as an instructor for all government.
On the other hand, individual country has its own duty to put global guidelines into actions. Firstly, international corporation does not have the authorities to directly run campaigns in a particular nation. Thus, these jobs will be passed down a level to each nation government to carry out. Secondly, every country has an environmental protection fund which is sponsored by its citizens and companies. Therefore, preventing pollutions and other issues is the job of the government to put this fund into use.
In conclusion, I believe that solving environmental problems is the fundamental responsibility of not only international organization but also each national government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75196850394 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3740892503 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0682693966 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334215043963 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106979806062 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108205259327 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229576460312 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121548787255 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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