These days, the human workforce is superseded by mechanical devices. I believe this trend has both positive and negative effects on all people, from the workers to the parties who receive services provided by these machines. In this essay, merits and demerits of such development are comprehensively discussed.
There are numerous benefits associated with using machines instead of humans. First and perhaps the most prominent is the decreased chances of people getting hurt. People are exposed to dangers in strenuous occupations such as working in metallurgy industry and car manufacturing factories. Therefore, utilizing mechanical operators like robots eliminates the threat of injuries in workers. Secondly, machines work faster and more efficiently. Mechanical devices do not need to take a break from work or rest because they do not get tired and can be put to work 24 hours a day. Consequently, in the same time frame, more products can be produced and there is more merchandise available for the people.
Conversely, there are drawbacks as well. Firstly, using synthetics instead of humans lead to an increase in unemployment rate. Modern technology, namely using robots, has rendered the human resource obsolete. Therefore, the number of available positions, particularly physically demanding jobs, has decreased and the workforce is dismissed. For example, research showed the unemployment rate in developing countries hiked after importing mechanical machines that replace human workers. Last but not least, the quality of produced items reduces by using machines because they do not possess the same precision and finesse as humans do.
All in all, as mentioned above, I personally believe performing tasks by machines instead of human has both advantages and disadvantages such as decreasing the hazards associated with hard jobs and raising of unemployment rate respectively. The goal should be to achieve a balance between employing these machines and humans so the disadvantages do not outgrow the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56451612903 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00928324356 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590322580645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5633123478 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217689053986 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590494520122 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435760381008 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12273104715 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157888229159 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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